domingo, 27 de septiembre de 2015

Lab session 6- Punctuation and sentences

Fixing things up!

Dear students,

It's time to stop and review the quality
 of your writing. For this you are going to have two sessions and then at the end of the second class you are going to hand in your notebook for grading, ALL the activities must be done, remember that.

In today's lab session:

1.  You'll work on punctuation and sentence types
2. To finish, you'll review some aspects of giving opinion.



Checking punctuation


As well as spelling correctly, you are expected to use correct punctuation. 

You must use capital letters in the 
correct places and use punctuation 
marks such as periods, commas, 
and question marks correctly. It is 
also  important to indent each sentence in
                                                case you decide to use indentation.
                                                Remember to be consistent.



Indent
This is done at the beginning of each paragraph.
Capital letters
These are used at the beginning of each sentence and for proper nouns.
Period, question mark, exclamation point
One of these is always used at the end of a sentence.
Commas
In a list of three or more things.

i.e. Home-cooked food is nutritious, tasty, and inexpensive.


To separate transition words from the rest of the sentence.
i.e. Additionally, physical education teaches children important skills such as teamwork.

Between two independent clauses.
i.e. Art and music classes are important, but academic classes are taken as even more important at school.

To separate a non-restrictive* clause
i.e. Maple syrup, which is made from the sap of the sugar maple tree, is an expensive treat.

After a subordinate clause at the beginning of a sentence.
i.e. If I had been more careful, I wouldn’t have lost the watch.

*non-restrictive clauses give additional information about a noun phrase. This extra information is not obligatory in the sentence.

Time for Practice Activities!

Tell me how well you did it. (Score)







 
Activity 1:

Go to: 
http://www.bristol.ac.uk/arts/exercises/grammar/grammar_tutorial/page_55.htm

Do the exercises, and write all the correct answers (10 sentences, number them as they appear)



Activity 2:
Go to:

1.https://owl.english.purdue.edu/exercises/3/16/14/


2.Do the exercises and write your  answers in your notebook. Use different color pen for the semicolons, colons, dashes, quotation marks, Italics , and parentheses .

3.Also write the correct ones.


Activity 3: Now do the following Quiz.

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quizzes/apostrophe_quiz2.htm

Which was your score? Let me know.

Sentence Types

Using variety in your sentences keeps your writing lively and interesting. 
It also shows the range of your writing ability. One way you can vary 
your sentences is by using a variety of sentence types. There are four 
types of sentences: simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex.

Simple sentence
A simple sentence has one subject and one verb.
i.e. Television offers a variety of programs.

Compound sentence

A compound sentence has two or more simple sentences linked by the conjunctions andor, and but.
i.e. Some people are not bothered by violent TV programs, but others avoid them.

Complex sentence

A complex sentence is made up of a simple sentence (an independent clause) and one or more subordinate clauses.
i.e. If we don’t like a particular TV program, we can easily change the channel.

Compound-complex sentence

A compound-complex sentence has two or more simple sentences and one or more subordinate clauses.
i.e. While many people avoid watching violent TV programs, others don’t mind them and they watch them frequently.


Activity 4:

Now do the following quiz related to sentences: 

http://esl.fis.edu/grammar/multi/satzType.htm

Write your answers as in the example , if wrong, correct it as it is shown

Ex. of a correct answer:

Q1. This is a simple sentence.
        Simple 

Ex. of a wrong answer
Q1. This is a simple sentence
        Complex  X. Simple
      

             Time for Practice !                     


 What is an opinion?



The introduction to your piece of writing should tell the reader what your
 opinion is. There is no right or wrong opinion. Whatever your opinion is, 
the reader will look to see how you express it. You can use certain set 
phrases, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs to express your opinion.


Set phrases
Verbs
Adjectives
Adverbs
In my opinion
From my point of view
In my view
To my way of thinking
To my mind
It seems to me that
To me
It is my opinion that
Agree
Believe
Think
Understand
Suppose
Guess
Hope
Imagine
Certain
Positive
Convinced
Sure
Persuaded
Confident
Definitely
Doubtless
Certainly
Probably
Conceivably
Maybe
Perhaps
Possibly
Seemingly

Examples:

  1. It seems to me that we haven't had many assignments in English this term.
  2. I suppose it will all make sense when we grow up.
  3. am certain of nothing but the holiness of the heart's affections and the truth of imagination
  4. I will make sure that I definitely pass my exams and show everyone that  I can do it.
  5. You've probably promised yourself to get off the couch and get some exercise



Activity 5


There are many webpages aiming at discussing about literature. Read the extracts below about Jackson´s The Possibility of Evil:

It is [a] very obvious [story] and does not catch my attention very much. Although it was quite comical at the ending when she receives the letter back.


This is a good little story that teaches us to treat others well and that if we don't, karma may not be far behind.


- [This story] shows you what this world truly is and how some people have the face of evil hidden behind the face of a sweet woman/man.

Choose one of the opinions above and write two solid paragraphs supporting your opinion and beliefs. Write the assignment using a wide variety of sentences and check your punctuation before submitting your file.








miércoles, 16 de septiembre de 2015

Lab session 5 -Mystery Stories

Hello students,

Today's lab session will be about writing mystery stories.


Please read the following information before getting started.







Why do people like it?


"What people enjoy about a mystery is the intellectual challenge. A mystery often presents a problem, (most specifically a crime or a specific ill against a character or community) at the beginning and then offers clues that the reader  can put together in order to hypothesize about a resolution."
"For myself I like to read a mystery for a couple of reasons, one is that they usually involve clues that you have to put together like a puzzle. Another reason is that most good mysteries allow you to "get away" from the real world for a short time!"
 taken from http://www.enotes.com/homework-help/why-do-people-like-read-mysteries

The unknown plays an important role in every mystery story. Who did it? What was that strange noise at night? Will the detective find the gun? Who (or what) has been pursuing our hero so relentlessly—and why?   
As you might guess, mystery writers know the answers to such questions before they begin writing. As they write, they drop clues to the reader.

An observant reader can sometimes figure out the mystery before finishing the story.
In fact, if the ending is a complete surprise, the writer has not done a good job! After finishing a mystery, the reader should be able to go back through the story and find clues that hinted at the solution.

Relentlessly: without stopping.

So as not to confuse these genres, have a look at this table. Mainly focus your attention in the Mystery boxes after you realise the difference among Mystery, Horror and Suspense.

Taken from:http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/6-secrets-to-creating-and-sustaining-suspense



Activity 1

Are you a mystery lover?



Have a look at the video and tell me which is your favourite mystery and why. At least two paragraphs of five lines each; use the structures and wide range of vocabulary you have learnt.





Taken from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zs1jKLK8Iv4




Activity 2:

Now read the following conclusion of a mystery story.




Think about how you would solve the mystery. 
Remember to give the reader a few hints along the way, so the ending isn’t a complete surprise.

A. Answer these questions first  as a way to brainstorm ideas:

1. How did she probably  meet  Doug? Why do you think so?
2. When did she meet Doug? 
3. Why was killing Doug the only way ?
4. Why did she want to be free?
5. Why did that car crush?Was she involved in the car crush? 
6. What is she going to do after this episode?

B. Now  write the rest of the story:





Work in pairs and  write a page with the rest of the story and give it an unexpected end.

When you are finished, make up a catchy title for your story, include a picture too.

Remember to share your printed work with your lab teacher next week.


Due date: Next class ( at the beggining of it)


Optional extra activity



Are you a  mystery lover? If so, visit the following link and enjoy reading mystery novels: 

http://flavorwire.com/434548/50-essential-mystery-novels-that-everyone-should-read